The table below shows the percentages of moblie phone owners using various mobile phone features from 2006 to 2010.

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The table provides a piece of information on how the public was using several features on their mobile phones between 2006 and 2010. Units are measured by percentages.

Overall

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, three main features of a handphone that have not changed significantly in terms of its function are to make calls, take photos and send

also

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receive text messages. Meanwhile, society was using other elements in the gadget

for instance

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games,

internet

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explorer, music and

video

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recording have increased by 2010. 100% of people were using their phone to make a call from 2006 to 2008, but

this

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number only decreased slightly to 99% in 2010.

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, during 2006 when the

internet

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has not yet provided, the community were not able to operate their phones to search for information using an

internet

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connection

as well as

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to do

video

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recording.

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, since 2008 the number of society using these features has been rising to 41% for

internet

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searching and 9% for

video

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recording. These numbers

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increased to 26% using

internet

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explorer and 35% using

video

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recording by the year 2010.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, video with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

180 words

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The table below shows the percentages of moblie phone owners using various mobile phone features from 2006 to 2010.

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