The table below shows the percentages of moblie phone owners using various mobile phone features from 2006 to 2010.

The table below shows the percentages of moblie phone owners using various mobile phone features from 2006 to 2010.
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The table provides a piece of information on how the public was using several features on their mobile phones between 2006 and 2010. Units are measured by percentages.
Overall
, three main features of a handphone that have not changed significantly in terms of its function are to make calls, take photos and send
also
receive text messages. Meanwhile, society was using other elements in the gadget
for instance
games,
internet
explorer, music and
video
recording have increased by 2010. 100% of people were using their phone to make a call from 2006 to 2008, but
this
number only decreased slightly to 99% in 2010.
In contrast
, during 2006 when the
internet
has not yet provided, the community were not able to operate their phones to search for information using an
internet
connection
as well as
to do
video
recording.
However
, since 2008 the number of society using these features has been rising to 41% for
internet
searching and 9% for
video
recording. These numbers
then
increased to 26% using
internet
explorer and 35% using
video
recording by the year 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, video with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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