It is believed that women are more suited to child-rearing than men. What is your opinion on this issue?

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There is an outdated opinion of people saying that mothers are more compatible with children's upbringing than fathers.

According to

me, gender really does not matter when it comes to kids as they are born impartial and they need both of them equally.

This

essay will

further

elaborate my opinion in detail leading to a logical conclusion. To commence with, scientifically and biologically, to make a child 2 human beings are needed. It

also

implies

while

raising them up, they need them both uniformly.

For instance

, my mother being a housewife was always there when it came to any help related to my studies or my lifestyle but my father has always supported me financially and has taught me more about the life lessons from his outdoor experience.

Secondly

, kids do not know anything about favourability and partiality.

Furthermore

, it is true motherly instincts are natural and more powerful but

that is

because they spend more time with them than fathers, it does not mean that children are more comfortable around women

while

growing up.

For instance

, I have seen working parents around me who make sure to equally contribute towards their young ones so that one does not get overburdened and children seem to enjoy

this

lifestyle better.

To conclude

, right from birth till they become an adult, equal support from both of them is preferred to the one being always there

while

the other shows up only when needed. I really do not believe in the notion that mothers are considered more responsible for bringing up their young ones than fathers.

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Topic Vocabulary:

child-rearing
caregiver
social constructs
nurturing
gender roles
stereotypes
paternity leave
co-parenting
development
economic pressures
primary caregiver
gender biases
fluidity of roles
societal norms
inherent differences

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It is believed that women are more suited to child-rearing than men. What is your opinion on this issue?

Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen, pencil or brush. What are the reasons for this? Is the decline in writing by hand a positive or negative development?

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Some companies prefer people to work in the office, while others facilitate their employees to work from home. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.