Scientists predict in the near future cars will be driven by computers, not people. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
According to
scientists’ prediction, in the near future, computers will replace the role of car drivers
. This
essay will discuss the advantages and drawbacks of this
viewpoint and my personal perspective will be illustrated in the conclusion.
On the one hand, there are some detrimental flaws that are found in trials for artificial intelligent drivers
. To begin
with, those mechanical ones cannot adapt to all-terrain, especially with quickly changing environments. For example
, they cannot process how to deal with some types of extreme weather such
as sudden storms. Subsequently
, those programmed drivers
might be attacked by hackers who have bad intentions. For instance
, they can reprogram all the auto-driving vehicles and cause a detrimental accident
.
On the other hand
, it is obvious that computer drivers
have their benefits. Firstly
, they can significantly decrease the number of accident
cases that relate to roads. It is said that ninety per cent of route accident
cases involve human factors. Secondly
, those kinds of vehicles can allow people
that
are not qualified Correct pronoun usage
who
for driving
Change preposition
to drive
such
as the elderly or disabled people
to go out on their own. For example
, people
who are mobile disabled now can go sightseeing without the aid of others such
as nurses and staff.
In conclusion, although
there are negative impacts related to safety such
as the adaptation before sudden changes and the protection from hackers’ attacks, the advantages of artificial intelligent drivers
including decreasing accident
numbers and allowing a more varied range of people
to go out outweigh their consequencesSubmitted by cathyngo1512 on
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