Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Railways

and

roads

both play a crucial role in the transportation. Some people believe the money

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by the

governments

for

construction

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and improvement of

railways

should be more than

roads

. I personally agree with that view for several reasons. One of

these

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reasons why I believe

railways

are more useful than

roads

is safety. In my opinion, the increasing number of traffic accidents is

an

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huge

problem

for both

governments

and society. One of the solutions

for

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this

problem

is using

train

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as a main type of public transportation

with

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spending more funds for setting up new

railways

.

Although

,

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trains are slower than cars,

governments

should encourage

population

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the population

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to use trains.

For example

, if

governments

construct many railway tracks in over-populated cities, people will use

train

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trains

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to reach their

workplace

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which

it

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will decrease the

amount

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of cars on the

roads

. Another reason why I believe

railways

are more important than

roads

is

air

pollution

. Climate change is a global issue

which

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all countries are trying to find alternative solutions for

this

problem

.

However

,

this

problem

is directly related

with

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the

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air

pollution

. If

governments

extend the size of railway tracks inside of the country, the usage of cars will

be

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decrease which

this

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creates an opportunity

for

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to balance the

the

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amount of

pollution

in the

air

.

Besides

climate change

issue

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, it will enable people to live

healthier

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a healthier

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and less stressful life.

For example

,

governments

should increase the number of trains which generate their power from electricity can help to reduce the amount of

air

pollution

. In conclusion, spending more money

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railways

rather than

roads

have plenty of advantages for

humans

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lives and

this

is the reason why

governments

should follow

this

policy.