Even though governments have worked hard to bring about improvements in the health care system, the overall standard of physical health in developed countries is decreasing. What are the potential reasons for this and what are some of the long term effects

With the increasing technology, where it's giving flexibility to Humankind, it's

also

ruining the physical

health

of

people

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the government has worked hard to bring effectiveness

in

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the

health

care department but the ratio of healthy

people

is declining with the passage of

time

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am agree

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with the aforementioned statement and in

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will shed light on the basic reasons related to

this

issue and what can be their long-term effects.

Firstly

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my opinion, the top cognition of

this

problem is lack of

time

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every person nowadays is very much engaged some in work, some in studies or other's in the race of life even that they do not have

time

to

lookafter

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look after

theirselves

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themselves

.

People

working at offices don't have

time

to go

for

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a gym or walk outside. Students do not have

time

to give themselves even

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they do not have proper meals most of the

time

. The quality meal is replaced by the

fastfood

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fast food

fast-food

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fessible

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feasible

availaibility

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availability

and affordable prices, working

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and students prefer outside food as

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they do not have

time

to prepare food at home.

Fastfood

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is harmful to

body

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in all ways, they just spoil the body.

Secondly

, another dominant cause is the internet.

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it's serving

people

with

uncounatble

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uncountable

and undeniable features and facilities

while

on the other hand

, it's

also

making

people

stuck to laptops, cellphones and all other digital devices.

People

prefer to spend

time

on social media for their fun and peace rather than, using other activities like

excercise

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exercise

and fun with family. In

this

way they

loose

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interest

from

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healthy habits, in fact, kids nowadays are addicted

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internet

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the internet

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and digital devices a lot, and it's a big hazard

for

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their eyesight.

This

problem is very common in

Childern

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children

with age 1-10 years only

due to

excessive use of

screen

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In addition

, the government has updated

health

care centres

according to

all emergencies and

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advancement

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in surgical tools

also

but, the number of unhealthy

people

's

are

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rising with every passing year regarding all the

above mentioned

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concerns. If we will not keep ourselves healthy with a fine

nieutritional

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nutritional

diet

than

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then

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we will get older before

time

, and

while

reaching

to

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actual old age we will not have

energy

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the energy

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to survive any more at any cost. Because

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evry

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every

health

hazard has long term effects.

To sum up

, I would like to say that

people

should

takecare

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take care

of their

health

first because, without

it

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they can't work or study. Government should impose some strict rules So, that

people

let it to take

serious

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