The line graph show the average number of weekly patients visiting for clinic of a hospital from 2010 to 2016.

The line graph show the average number of weekly patients visiting for clinic of a hospital from 2010 to 2016.
The provided line chart illustrates the average
figure
of
patients
by
week
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a week
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of four different hospital clinics over a-six year period between 2010 and 2016. Looking more closely at the trend for the graphs, it can be clearly seen that an upward trend is observed for all graphs except the
birth
control
clinic
where a fluctuating trend is seen.
According to
the chart, in 2010, the
birth
control
clinic
was the most popular
clinic
,
roughly
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250
patients
, followed by the eye and dental clinics,
125
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with 125
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and 100
patients
respectively.
In addition
, the diabetic
clinic
was the least, 70
patients
. The
figure
for
birth
control
revealed a fluctuation at approximately 250
patients
over the period,
whereas
there was a surge of the eye
figure
to overtake the
birth
control
figure
and reach a peak at 350
patients
in 2016 Meanwhile, a gradual growth of dental
patients
took place from 100
patients
in 2010 to 130
patients
in 2016.
Furthermore
,
this
is followed by a moderate rise of diabetic
patients
by 80
patients
from 70
patients
to 180
patients
between 2010 and 2016.
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