Social media addiction: Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays social publishing influences the nation in different ways. The social sections have some drawbacks
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benefits. To some extent , I agree with the negative effects but in , my opinion there are more benefits. On the one hand, there are some bad effects of social
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on the public,
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as health issues.
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, the community spend most of their time on screen
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way it directly affects their eyesight.
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, the public did not participate in physical activities like outdoor games.
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social
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they don't have enough time to sit with family and friends and it makes distance between social relationships.
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, social
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gives a platform to those who want to do something in acting , dancing, or comedy but
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some ,circumstances they did not get a chance.
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, with the help of Facebook, and Instagram people can connect with the world and explore their knowledge regarding other cultures and languages.
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is the best opportunity to make a good carrier in other countries by connecting with people on social
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. Social
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enhance their confidence level
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personality.
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but not least, social
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are a good source of income because people can earn money by selling their products on these
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. In conclusion, for some ,reasons I agree social
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have a bad impact on the public but
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the social platform gives more opportunities for the community to come on the front foot.
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