Social media addiction: Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In today’s ,world it is argued by some people that the use of mobile applications

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as Facebook has bad effects on individuals and society as well. I partly agree with

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point of view. On the one hand, social networks have changed human lives to be better and more convenient.

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internet citizens can easily get access to everything.To give a clear example, folk can contact their relatives and friends with whom they have lost connection.,

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social media has improved so much that we can contact strangers on the web only knowing their name and surname. In consequence, inhabitants find their old acquaintances new and do not cut off contact with individuals they cannot meet in life.

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, crowds have become inclined to live on social media. In other quarters, the majority of web users almost do not live in their real life, they are isolated from their friends and family.

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, for fascinated ,users it is more important to be online, send text messages and video calls rather than go outside and socialize.

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, the community become attached to their beds,

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increasing the chance of developing diseases

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as obesity and depression. For

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,reason people have to concentrate to improve their quality of life and having fresh air. In conclusion, several problems have been caused by social media despite its advantages, if people had not been that addicted to their phones, the problem will been solved easily.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

252 words

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Social media addiction: Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

YOU HAVE A BUSINESS PRESENTATION IN WHICH YOU WANT TO USE EQUIPMENT FOR WHICH YOU NEED ONE OF YOUR COLLEAGUES TO HELP YOU IN ITS OPERATION. WRITE A LETTER TO YOUR COLLEAGUE AND ASK HIM TO HELP YOU. When and where is your presentation Which equipment you have to use How he can help you

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