Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed rather than work for a company or organization. What might be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Recently, it has been noticed that
people
now prefer to be their own boss to being
an employee in an institution. Little did they know that, Wrong verb form
be
although
it brings self respect
and Add a hyphen
self-respect
self worth
, starting Add a hyphen
self-worth
ones
business can be mentally draining as bankruptcy is a possible drawback. I will expatiate on these with relevant examples and a logical conclusion.
There are several reasons Change to a genitive case
one's
people
want to have their own personal businesses like self respect
and freedom to mention a few. Add a hyphen
self-respect
This
is due to
the fact the
society believes and sees any sole proprietor who doesn't depend on anyone for survival as being influential and wealthy. Correct your spelling
that
For example
, anyone who would not submit under
any employer, can fend for himself and possibly create opportunities for others will be highly Change preposition
to
honored
in Change the spelling
honoured
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
Also
, being free from any form of workplace restrictions, rules and regulations is a reason people
want to be on their own. Being able to work at ones
pace without pressure from any boss makes one work very efficiently and get results. Change to a genitive case
one's
For instance
, some people
are know
to break down mentally when they work under pressure. Change the verb form
are known
Thus
, it is clear that
working for oneself is beneficial.
On the other hand
, there are also
various drawbacks in being a boss of oneself such
as loss of funds due to
poor management and mental derailment. Starting a personal business empire with little or no experience can lead one to running
bankrupt which if care is not taken can cause emotional stress. To illustrate, a small business owner lost all his capital, Wrong verb form
run
profits
to an online market owing to the fact that he was not experienced in it. Correct word choice
and profits
This
on
the long run made him Change preposition
in
lost
his mind and he is currently being taken care of in a psyche home. Wrong verb form
lose
Hence
, having ones
institution has its own cons.
In conclusion, Change to a genitive case
one's
people
have personal reasons they would not want to submit under any employer such
as,
freedom and being valued in Remove the comma
apply
the
society, Correct article usage
apply
however
, this
has lots of downsides like loosing
funds and mental illnessReplace the word
losing
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...