Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or diagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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few decades our world has advanced to an unimaginable rhythm

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it did not bring just scientifical discoveries and healthcare improvements, it

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brought serious issues, one of them being

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, some argue that the best way to solve

pollution

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problems it's by increasing the

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of petrol which would lead to solving

traffic

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pollution

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, I agree with the statement but even so, I believe that there are other measures that we can take to limit contamination to the minimum possible. A study from 2017 showed that the higher gasoline prices reduce

traffic

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flows with an average size effect of -0.04,

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, people tend to take more public transportation on peak hours reducing

pollution

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, another investigation from 2020 revealed that it does not only reduce

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flow but by every 1% increased in fuel

price

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there is a 0.4% reduction in the number of fatal road

traffic

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accidents, without a doubt the growth of petrol

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reduces not only but

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traffic

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and

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pollution

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and vehicle-involved accidents.

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what has already been mentioned can greatly reduce

pollution

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, it is extremely important that one stick to these measures if he is interested in reducing even more environmental

pollution

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recycling and reusing, limiting the use of plastic bags, using fans

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of air conditioner and afforestation.

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, what has already been mentioned, I believe that increasing the

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of petrol is the best way to solve

pollution

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and

traffic

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problems,

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, there are other measures that can

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help take care of

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issue.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

266 words

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or diagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Fully explain your ideas

Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Overpopulation is the world's most serious environmental problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The most important education for students should be conducted in classroom，not out of the classroom.

Many people realize that people living in the 21st century generally have a better quality of lives than people born in earlier centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?