A person's worth nowadays seems to judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned value, such as honour, kindness, and trust no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays
people
who are doing high-paid jobs are seemed
as worthy because of their high social status and material possessions. ,Correct your spelling
deemed
However
I and others firmly agree, that the Add a comma
,However
person
's value is in kindness , honour and so on. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss the reasons that urge me to think in this
way.
For instance
, one
of my uncles worked in Bharat Heavy Electricals Limited. Initially
,he worked as a regular staff after that because of his hard work, he was appointed to a high post in the company. All of my relatives treated him as a high-quality person
. Furthermore
, one
of my neighbours asked him for money
for help but he refused to do it. Two years ago,he retired and came back to his hometown. Moreover
, he was diagnosed with cancer and he doesn't have blood relatives to take care of him. At that time, when he refused to do help in the past that person
now taking care of him. Now,he understands money
is just the value.
However
, some people
are very kind-hearted and are working in a small company. This
kind of person
always shows kindness to others. Even though,
they don't have enough Remove the comma
apply
money
to run a family sometimes if someone asks them to help, they don't show any rejection. For example
, one
of my school friends is from a poor background.One
day, the charity visited our school and school management asked us to bring cash. Moving further
, me and my classmates were shocked to see that she brought more money
compared to us. By seeing this
, my teachers praised her for her kindness.
To summarise, people
's worth is in their behaviour not in the money
how much they earn. So, one
should not judge people
according to
social status.Submitted by niraikalirajan on
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