A person's worth nowadays seems to judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned value, such as honour, kindness, and trust no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays
people
who are doing high-paid jobs are
seemed
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as worthy because of their high social status and material possessions. ,
However
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I and others firmly agree, that the
person
's value is in kindness , honour and so on. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss the reasons that urge me to think in
this
way.
For instance
,
one
of my uncles worked in Bharat Heavy Electricals Limited.
Initially
,he worked as a regular staff after that because of his hard work, he was appointed to a high post in the company. All of my relatives treated him as a high-quality
person
.
Furthermore
,
one
of my neighbours asked him for
money
for help but he refused to do it. Two years ago,he retired and came back to his hometown.
Moreover
, he was diagnosed with cancer and he doesn't have blood relatives to take care of him. At that time, when he refused to do help in the past that
person
now taking care of him. Now,he understands
money
is just the value.
However
, some
people
are very kind-hearted and are working in a small company.
This
kind of
person
always shows kindness to others. Even though
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they don't have enough
money
to run a family sometimes if someone asks them to help, they don't show any rejection.
For example
,
one
of my school friends is from a poor background.
One
day, the charity visited our school and school management asked us to bring cash. Moving
further
, me and my classmates were shocked to see that she brought more
money
compared to us. By seeing
this
, my teachers praised her for her kindness. To summarise,
people
's worth is in their behaviour not in the
money
how much they earn. So,
one
should not judge
people
according to
social status.
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