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The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.
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the above image illustrates the past and present scenarios of the university's sports
court
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.
to begin
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 with, there are numerous renovations and improvements that had been done.
firstly
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,the outdoor pool has been reformed to the indoor pool ,but the reception and the cafe
remains
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remain
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 in the same position .we can see the changing room being shifted between the indoor pool and the fitness centre,which was previously the tennis
court
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. the park has been rebuilt
to
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 a large
basket-ball
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basketball
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court
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 and
finally
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 , the parking lot for cars has been changed to a big tennis
court
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 with four large spaces.
to
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apply
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finally
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 conclude
with
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apply
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, the university's sports
court
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 has been utilized and developed
to
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into
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 a new one with a few
and
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apply
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well derived
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 decisions.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words court with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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