The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.
the above image illustrates the past and present scenarios of the university's sports
court
.
to begin
with, there are numerous renovations and improvements that had been done.
firstly
,the outdoor pool has been reformed to the indoor pool ,but the reception and the cafe remains
in the same position .we can see the changing room being shifted between the indoor pool and the fitness centre,which was previously the tennis Change the verb form
remain
court
.
the park has been rebuilt to
a large Change preposition
into
basket-ball
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basketball
court
and finally
, the parking lot for cars has been changed to a big tennis court
with four large spaces.
to
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finally
conclude with
, the university's sports Change preposition
apply
court
has been utilized and developed to
a new one with a few Change preposition
into
and
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decisions.Add a hyphen
well-derived
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