The diagram below shows time spent watching TV by age and gender in the UK in 1995 and 1999
The given bar chart illustrates the rate of time spending to watch
TV
in a particular age
group
(from 4 years
old until over 65 years
old) both for men and women in a week
in Britain from 1995 until 1999.
Overall
, the rate of time-consuming to watch TV
in England underwent an upward trend for every group
of age
, only people
in the 4-15 age
group
and the 25-34 age
group
experience fluctuation. The highest rate of time allocated for watching TV
was in elderly people
, and the lowest was in the children age
group
.
Looking into detail, it is clear that
people
in the age
group
of over 65 years
old allocated the most time to watch TV
accounting for over 30 hours
compared to those in the 4-15 group
of age
who only contributed under 20 hours
per week
. Similarly
, people
55-64 years
old donate more than 25 hours
weekly, while
those 45-54 years
old only gave below 25 hours
over the given period.
Furthermore
, the figure for the 25-34 age
group
allocates just about 26 hours
per week
compared to those in 4-15 who only contribute under 20 hours
per week
. Both of the figures witnessed a fluctuation that only peaked at around 26 hours
per week
.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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