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In poor families, teenagers may have to work part-time as well as study. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this for these teenagers.

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In middle-class
families
 or poor
families
, youngsters generally do part-time
jobs
 and
study
. I partially agree with the statement that earning with part-time
jobs
 can help children to earn their day-to-day expenses
while
 they can not concentrate fully on academics. These days, there are plenty of advantages to doing
work
. If a child is doing
work
 with
study
then
 he can learn more.
For example
, he learns about technology and management and
also
 gains experience which is essential for the future.
Additionally
, side income is helpful for
families
 to live less stressful life because,
in
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poor
families
, they can not depend on one person's earnings.
Besides
 the advantages, there are a few drawbacks, when teenagers are doing part-time
jobs
 to
study
then
 they can not give their 100% in their studies or
work
 because of lack of timing and diversion of both fields.
For instance
, if a child wants to get marks above 90%
then
 he has to give more time to academics but with part-time
jobs
 he can not do.
Moreover
, pupils can feel tired when they do both
jobs
 and
study
 because part-time
work
 requires physical
work
 and the academic field takes mental
work
 so it may be a high chance to become physical and mental works. Many times part-time
jobs
 can become a burden because of higher authority's torture.
To conclude
,
work
 with
study
 gives lots of experience and knowledge which is paramount for the future.
however
, a child has to learn time management skills to deal with
study
 and
work
 both.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • part-time work
  • finances
  • time management
  • work-life balance
  • academic performance
  • minimum wage
  • job market
  • social dynamics
  • work experience
  • career development
  • economic necessity
  • self-sufficiency
  • exploitation
  • stress management
  • peer pressure
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