The supplied map gives data on the developments that were at the seaside resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005
The map describes the renovations that took place to the Seaside
Resort
of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
Overall
, the size of the Resort
remained the same. However
, four new facilities were added in 2005, reducing the number of residential areas.
In 1990, the North- Westen side of the resort
had houses with two roads demarcating the two areas. Also
, there was also
a bush area with trees. While
the North-Eastern part had a school, hospital, a
house, parking area and a rail station.
Correct article usage
apply
This
changed by 2005, it is noted that the number of houses on the North-Western side of the resort
was reduced to accommodate a supermarket. Trees were cut down and houses were built in place. Secondly
, the North-Eastern of the Resort
had empty space next to the parking area, whereas
, trees next to the rail station were cleared to create room for a factory and a ferry station.Submitted by deborahmmunengami on
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