The supplied map gives data on the developments that were at the seaside resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005

The map describes the renovations that took place to the Seaside

Resort

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of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

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, the size of the

Resort

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remained the same.

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, four new facilities were added in 2005, reducing the number of residential areas. In 1990, the North- Westen side of the

resort

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had houses with two roads demarcating the two areas.

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, there was

also

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a bush area with trees.

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the North-Eastern part had a school, hospital,

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house, parking area and a rail station.

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changed by 2005, it is noted that the number of houses on the North-Western side of the

resort

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was reduced to accommodate a supermarket. Trees were cut down and houses were built in place.

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, the North-Eastern of the

Resort

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had empty space next to the parking area,

whereas

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, trees next to the rail station were cleared to create room for a factory and a ferry station.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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152 words

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The supplied map gives data on the developments that were at the seaside resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself.

Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: Your reason for writing What you would like to happen A nice, respectful style.

“Prevention is better than cure.” Out of country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and prevention measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The demand for online coaching services and video courses has grown significantly in the digital age. Some now feel this method of learning is a superior option to in-person learning. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?