The pie graph below shows the electrivity production in ireland and the tables shows the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country
The pie graph describes the
source
of production
of Correct article usage
the production
electricity
in Ireland
, while
the table shows the main reasons why people in Ireland
use electricity
.
Overall
, coal is the biggest source
of electricity
in Ireland
. More than half of the electricity
is used on
heating. Change preposition
for
Whereas
consumer electronics and phone charging consume only a small proportion of this
electricity
.
Sources of electricity
in Ireland
are listed in percentages as coal, gas, wind, and solar sources. Coal is the primary source
which accounted for 45%. After
this
, gas is the second most source
utilized for electricity
at 35%. Wind and solar sources however
show a small proportion at 10% each.
Individuals in Ireland
use almost half the electricity
for heating. Lighting consume 20% of the total electricity
while
kitchen appliances consume less than lighting by 5
% difference. Consumer electronic and phone charging Correct article usage
a 5
were
the least items consuming Change the verb form
was
electricity
with 5% for each.Submitted by rawanabdulali on
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