The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

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university shorts courts

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in 1990

and now. There are two pictures.

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, in the year 1990, there was a big park and even a car park. There was

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cafe and a reception. There was an outdoor pool and a tennis court.

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time things like a basketball court and fitness centre

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to 1990. The changing room is now

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big.

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there was

swimming

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pool outside but now

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inside. The side of cafe and reception have not increased. Almost, all things have developed

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of the canteen and reception. Tennis courts have doubled after 1990. In conclusion

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there is great development seen from 1990 to the present time. The car and park

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been removed in today's time. There is a great change seen from past to present. Universities have

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in sports courts. Growth has taken place in a college a lot.

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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.

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The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

sOME PEOPLE SAY hISTORY IS ONE OF THE MOST IMPORTANT SCHOOL SUBJECTS. oTHERS PEOPLE THINK THAT, IN TODAY'S WORLD, SUBJECTS LIKE SCIENCE AND TECHNOLOGY ARE MORE IMPORTANT THAN hISTORY, Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people say that the only way to guarantee to get a good job is to complete a course in university education. Other claims that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. How far do you agree or disagree with the above views?

Some people think that teenagers should do some unpaid work in the local community. Some people believe that it benefit both young people and society as a whole. To what extend do you agree or disagree?