The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

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The above maps display

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university shorts courts

in1990

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in 1990

and now. There are two pictures.

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, in the year 1990, there was a big park and even a car park. There was

small

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cafe and a reception. There was an outdoor pool and a tennis court.

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, in

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todays

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time things like a basketball court and fitness centre

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add

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compare

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to 1990. The changing room is now

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big.

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there was

swimming

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pool outside but now

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inside. The side of cafe and reception have not increased. Almost, all things have developed

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of the canteen and reception. Tennis courts have doubled after 1990. In conclusion

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there is great development seen from 1990 to the present time. The car and park

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been removed in today's time. There is a great change seen from past to present. Universities have

growth

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in sports courts. Growth has taken place in a college a lot.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

154 words

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The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

Some people believe that too much attention and too many sources are given to the protection of wild animals and wild birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Large members of visitors can endanger ancient archeological sites such as Machu Plcchu. In your opinion, is it more important to try to preserve such sites or allow public access to them?

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in a city, while others think that bicycle is better. Discuss both sides and give your opinion