Smacking childern is the best form of discipline To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education comes from

parent

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plays

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and plays

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an

importance

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in the growing process of

children

. And each

parent

will have different actions and Smacking

children

is

also

a

way

to teach them when they are spoiled. In my point of view, I

disagreed

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that Smacking is a good

way

to control

Children

. The effects of

Smacking

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on

children

and some serious issues will prove

this

.

Firstly

, The

children

are just like white paper, what things

parents

treat them will print in their minds.

On the other hand

, Smacking will affect badly to next generation. The

Children

will copy the

Parent

's action and apply it to their

children

.

Secondly

, The

Children

will not know their

problem

if the

Parents

are just using the action to communicate.

Therefore

, they will make mistakes again.

For instance

, one boy went to bed late and his

parents

smacked him. At that

time

, he will be scared and he will go to bed on

time

the next

time

because his

Parents

will be angry at him if he does not. Actually, He does not understand why should he go to bed on

time

.

Therefore

, he will go to bed

lately

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without his

parents

because no one will be mad at him.

Last

but not least,

this

action will affect badly the relationship between the

children

and

parents

. They will have a distance from their

parents

. They are

shy

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to share problems because they are scared their

parent

will be angry with them and they will keep the

problem

to their own. To summarise, Smacking

child

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a child

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is a bad solution to discipline. After a thorough analysis of

this

subject, Smacking will be effective in a short

time

but it will be a bad

way

in a long

time

. It affects seriously the

parents

and the

children

, too. So the best

way

is

the

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parent

should sit down with the

Children

to talk, to explain clearly the

problem

and give them What is the result of that

problem

?

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What is the solution?