Smacking childern is the best form of discipline To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education comes from

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an

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in the growing process of

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. And each

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will have different actions and Smacking

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is

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a

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to teach them when they are spoiled. In my point of view, I

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that Smacking is a good

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to control

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. The effects of

Smacking

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on

children

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and some serious issues will prove

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.

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, The

children

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are just like white paper, what things

parents

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treat them will print in their minds.

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, Smacking will affect badly to next generation. The

Children

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will copy the

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's action and apply it to their

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.

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, The

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will not know their

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if the

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are just using the action to communicate.

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, they will make mistakes again.

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, one boy went to bed late and his

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smacked him. At that

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, he will be scared and he will go to bed on

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the next

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because his

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will be angry at him if he does not. Actually, He does not understand why should he go to bed on

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.

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, he will go to bed

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without his

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because no one will be mad at him.

Last

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but not least,

this

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action will affect badly the relationship between the

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and

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. They will have a distance from their

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. They are

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to share problems because they are scared their

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will be angry with them and they will keep the

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to their own. To summarise, Smacking

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is a bad solution to discipline. After a thorough analysis of

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subject, Smacking will be effective in a short

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but it will be a bad

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in a long

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. It affects seriously the

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and the

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, too. So the best

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is

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parent

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should sit down with the

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to talk, to explain clearly the

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and give them What is the result of that

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What is the solution?