The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart describes why
people
choose to move to the UK
and why others decide to leave the UK
in the year 2007.
In general, thereare
a number of immigrants Correct your spelling
there are
such
as studying, joining family, working, and other
things. Add a missing verb
do other
However
, it can be seen that employment was one major reason followed. Only a few people
gave no reasons for moving to the UK
while
leaving the Uk
to study overseas was not so common.
First,
30% of people
moved to the UK
as a result
of a job definite job offer. This
was followed by 26% of international students studying in that country. In addition
, a sizeable number of people
(15%) lived in the UK
to accompany or join their relatives. Whereas
, 6% had no reasons.
On the other hand
, some citizens of the UK
also
left their home country to find a job overseas. It is shown that 29% travelled to other countries. Secondly
, it was also
common for people
to leave the UK
to find employment and for no reason with 22% and 10% respectively. Interestingly, 4% of residents left the UK
to be international students in other countries as compared to immigrants.Submitted by deborahmmunengami on
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