The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.
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The map displays how much change has been made between the year 1990 and to present time in a university sports complex.
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, the cafe area and reception have been the same over the period, apart from the major changes. At the beginning of the year 1990, the university had car parking and a small park where most of the students used to spend their leisure time apparently at the present moment it has been reconstructed into a Basketball
court
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and a Tennis
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.
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, the Tennis
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in the past year could accommodate only 4 players
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now it can allow more than 8 players
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the expansion of more courts.
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, the outdoor pool got renovated into an inside pool to accompany individuals no matter what the weather might be outside. Changing rooms have been moved closer to the Fitness centre where a moderately smaller version of the tennis
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was once.
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changing rooms are
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built substantially bigger
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to the time of 1990.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words court with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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