The two bar charts show the proportion of 14-16 year-old students studying a modern foreign language in an English Speaking country and the top three popular foreign languages. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two bar charts show

 the proportion of 14-16 year-old students studying a modern foreign language in an English Speaking country and the top three popular foreign languages. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the

main features and make comparisons where

relevant.
The two charts
illustrates
Change the verb form
illustrate
show examples
the school is
students
who
Correct your spelling
learned
leared
Correct your spelling
learned
a foreign
Correct your spelling
language
langueage
Correct your spelling
language
at 14 to 16 years from an
english
Change the capitalization
English
show examples
speaking country and
top
Correct article usage
the top
show examples
three famous
language
Change to a plural noun
languages
show examples
were
Correct your spelling
learned
cleared
leared
Correct your spelling
learned
by
students
It is clear that
. The percentages of girls who studied a foreign
language
were
highest
Correct article usage
the highest
show examples
.
Meanwhile
Add a comma
,Meanwhile
show examples
the figure for
students
Correct pronoun usage
who leared
show examples
leared spainsh
Correct your spelling
learned Spanish
be lowest. In 1984. The quality of girls
Correct pronoun usage
who leared
show examples
leared
Correct your spelling
learned
a foreign
language
steady decrease from 48% to 40% in 2007. At the same
time
Add a comma
,time
show examples
the figure for a foreign
language
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
studed
Correct your spelling
studied
by boys declined slightly by 30 to 25% in 2007. The
percentages
Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
show examples
of grammar french was
leared
Correct your spelling
learned
cleared
from
Change preposition
by
show examples
students
significant fall from 50% to 25% from 1984 to 2007.
While
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
the rates of
language
spanish
Change the capitalization
Spanish
show examples
was studied by
students
increased slightly by 5% to 10% during the period. The figure for
language
Correct article usage
the language
show examples
german
Capitalize word
German
show examples
experienced a slow fall from 20% to 15%.
Submitted by anhnguhongmai on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, language with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • modern foreign languages
  • English-speaking country
  • demographic
  • participation
  • gender disparities
  • trends
  • popularity rankings
  • analyzing
  • implications
  • cultural factors
  • economic ties
  • global job market
  • increasingly globalized
What to do next:
Look at other essays: