Many people spend a lot of money on clothes, haircut and beauty products to enhance their appearance. Discuss advantages and disadvantages.

millennium has ushered mankind to

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need of maintaining one’s image. It seems easier to people to get

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the same

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by purchasing

apparels

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apparel

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and cosmetics. I intend to explore

merits

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the merits

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and demerits of

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tendency in upcoming segments. On the one hand,

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and foremost benefit is that it boosts the confidence of individuals. By getting praise from others, mortals feel contended and satisfied.

Due to

this

,

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can face everyone in any situation as they do not look ugly because of these products. Eventually,

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the humans

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humans

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image becomes confident and attractive.

Secondly

, to show

theirselves

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themselves

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elegant

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and young.

In other words

, there are innumerable artists who have attractive

personality

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personalities

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as they use extravagant cosmetics on their skin

from

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long

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time. One clear example is Shilpa Shetty who is in her 50s

however

she does not show her age.

Lastly

, enhancing job opportunities for numerous folks. In order to get ready for any show or occasion, people hire make-up artists and

hair dressers

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hairdressers

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.

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in

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result

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becomes earning source for these mortals.

On the other hand

, there are lots of drawbacks as well. It gives rise to plenty of health ailments. As everyone does not have enough knowledge about the product, they just watch the advertisement and attracts towards different beauty products. Every product has

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own symptoms

nevertheless

few individuals cannot understand because of

illiteration

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alliteration

illiterate

.

This

in turn creates several problems related to the skin.

Furthermore

, it is a

wastage

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of money.

For example

, branded clothes and cosmetics. These things are so expensive. In order to get these items, a lot of money is sufficient.

Therefore

,

this

is not affordable for everyone mortal.

In addition

to

this

, it weakens the quality of

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the country’s

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youth. People would not only improve their external image but

also

reduces their internal art.

For instance

, lack of skills. In conclusion, the aforesaid notion has advantages in terms of boosting confidence, looking beautiful and more

however

, it has some disadvantages

such

as creating health issues, wasting money etcetera.