The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

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maps
illustrate the layout of a university sports
center
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today, and how it will look after renovation.
Overall
,
it is clear that
in future will considerable changes will happen including, the space of
gym
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the gym
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will increase,
leisure
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a leisure
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pool will add, and
café
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a café
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and
sport
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shop
wil
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will
build.
Furthermore
, two dance
studio
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studios
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will establish as well
sports
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a sports
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hall and the number of changing
room
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rooms
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will triple .
Moreover
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there some spaces will still
unchange
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change
namely, Reception, Seating. Looking at the
maps
in more detail, in
north
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of
maps
the area of
gym
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the gym
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will extend. In the east of
maps
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the outdoor courts will merge with the
center
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centre
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building will
it
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apply
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replace
with
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two dance
studio
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studios
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and
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a sprots
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sprots
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sports
hall. In future plans in the
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east south
east-south
eastsouth
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one changing
room
and café will construct. In the
center
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of
maps
seating and changing
room
and
recpetion
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reception
will still remain without alter . In the
west
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the outdoor will integrate with
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the bulidng
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bulidng
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building
and change into it to leisure pool. In the
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west south
west-south
westsouth
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one changing
room
and
sport
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sports
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shop will introduce.
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