All over the world, the number of overweight people is growing. What do you feel are the main causes of this ? What are the effect ?

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Nowadays,
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obecity
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obesity
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common problem, kids, adults,
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and seniors
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have too much weight. Now, it is usual to see overweight people, but is
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an illness? Or it is a
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of our bad habits? And how we can fix that? Let's begin, with biochemical
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processes
in our
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. First of all, we
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know how
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weight in our bodies changes. Change in
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mass is the
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of
metabolism
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changes in our
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,
metabolism
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itself is the connection of chemical reactions, which can change in lots of situations.
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, if we don't have much
food
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, our
metabolism
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will react and begin to release fats to feed itself or store fats if there is too much of them.
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, mostly in all
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obecity
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obesity
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of diabetes or our lifestyle. Sometimes it is a random thing to have diabetes diseases, the
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of it in some cases is overweight.
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there
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our bad
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lifestyle
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cause. In modern times lots of people don't want to make
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,
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result
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they order junk
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, slowly damaging their health and provoking
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changes.
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, our routine is simple we sit most
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time, because of laziness more and more people forget to exercise,
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leads to
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situatio
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situation
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when extra calories don't release and again,
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body
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begins to store fats. As we know
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obecity
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obesity
has bad effects on our daily life.
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, it can provoke heart diseases, bone problems etc.
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, mostly the leading overweight cause is the
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of our bad lifestyle.
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Obecity
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Obesity
is the main reason for heart problems etc. The main method to fix that are
exercises
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exercise
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and
blanced
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balanced
healthy
food
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Overweight
  • Obesity
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Nutritional education
  • Aggressive marketing
  • Screen time
  • Economic factors
  • Genetic predisposition
  • Chronic illnesses
  • Heart disease
  • Diabetes
  • Hypertension
  • Psychological issues
  • Low self-esteem
  • Healthcare systems
  • Productivity
  • Stigmatization
  • Discrimination
  • Portion sizes
  • Convenience food
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