People cart eat a wide variety of food that can be grown in other areas. As a result, people eat more food produced in other regions than local food. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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access

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a various range of

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produced in different parts of the world. What is more, they highly depended on

food

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than local

product

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products

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The merits of consuming

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from

another areas

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significantly outnumber the demerits. It could be seen a great deal of edible

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from other countries through the markets.

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is beneficial for people, because, they could buy and consume a huge range of

food

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, fresh fruit and vegetables. The other advantage is that

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having

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condition

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for agricultural activities in some regions, people

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able to

caltivate

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cultivate

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crops. In

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this

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circumistances

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circumstance

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, importing

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agricultural

products

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would be the best option. There are some drawbacks

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relying on non-local

products

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. In some cases the cost of transportation of goods

cause

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them more expensive,

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, manufacturing or

producting

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production

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of goods have their

expences

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. A substantial downside

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depending on foreign

products

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some job opportunities could be lost, the very

opitome

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of which are

farmering

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farming

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or working in hausbaderies. despite

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a vast of occupations, it could be advantageous because

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some natural resources

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as water and soil could be maintained. In conclusion, regard to the right choice of healthy

food

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example

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fruit and vegetables,

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,

saving

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ecological resources, the pros of non-local

products

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are more than their cons.