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The given line chart illustrates the number of people in the UK commuting daily by three different vehicles from 1970 to 2030.

The given line chart illustrates the number of people in the UK commuting daily by three different vehicles from 1970 to 2030.
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The line chart depicts the
number
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 of British people who travel every day by car,
bus
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 and
train
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 between the years 1970 and 2030. Units are measured in millions.
Overall
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, the
number
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 of commuters by car was the highest compared with those who travelled by
bus
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 and
train
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. Commuters by
train
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 had the lowest until it gradually increased from 2010. There was a gradual rise in the
number
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 of British people who took the
train
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 in 2010 and expected to continue to go up to 2030. The
number
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 of people who took the
bus
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 was steadily decreasing over the years
in contrast
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 to those who took the
train
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. Looking at the specific trends, the
number
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 of commuters by car was well under 6 million in 1970 as opposed to that of travellers by
train
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 and
bus
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 as it was at

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, bus, train with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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