All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that
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powered by electricity are more advantageous than traditional
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which burn petrol. I partially agree with
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opinion and believe that traditional
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should not be substituted with new power
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completely. On the one hand, electronic vehicles should be adopted by the global market and consumers because it is eco-friendly. Without burning traditional fuels, those
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can reduce carbon emissions, and thereby, mitigate the global warming issue, which is mainly caused by the emission of modern
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.
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research, compared with traditional vehicles, electronic
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produced by Tesla can generate less greenhouse gas, and
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is the major reason why Tesla can shock the market with its surprisingly increasing demand.
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,
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burning traditional fuels should still have their share in the market for a long time.
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because traditional
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have relatively lower costs in capital and more mature producing technology, leading to a lower price and more comfortable driving experience when compared with new power
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.
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,
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type of car is affordable for low-income families and can provide convenience to their normal life.
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, even though Tesla is prevalent in some developed countries, traditional car brands
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as Honda and Toyota are still reporting increasing sales in South Asia and India. In conclusion, from my perspective,
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electronic vehicles are environmentally friendly and can benefit the well-being in the long term, traditional
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parallelly contribute value to poor families and should not be replaced completely.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • air pollution
  • greenhouse gases
  • climate change
  • sustainable
  • renewable
  • electric vehicles
  • battery technology
  • charging infrastructure
  • range anxiety
  • government support
  • incentives
  • subsidies
  • renewable energy
  • environmental impact
  • energy efficiency
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