You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Does money means
happiness
.
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,time
cash
plays an
great role in Change the article
a
a
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apply
ever
life, and it is important to earn Correct your spelling
every
the
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apply
cash
but by getting more income a
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apply
people
does
not get happy. Correct subject-verb agreement
do
Things
like a
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apply
sucess
, knowledge, good health, Correct your spelling
success
a
family love, Correct article usage
apply
a
friends love and much more can Correct article usage
apply
also
brings
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bring
the
joy.
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apply
cash
has the power to buy goods and services easily. There are so many reasons why cash
can make society
joyful. According to
some ,people
income can buy Change noun form
people's
the
joy. Correct article usage
apply
Firstly
, pounds can be goods which can make society
smile
as well as
children. For example
, if a person gets happy by buying a car then
that way pounds can make a person happy. Things
like a
success, Correct article usage
apply
good
body and much Correct article usage
a good
can
Correct quantifier usage
more can
also
buy a smile
. A good relationship can mean lot
to other Add an article
a lot
people
. Exposing places can make society
make smile
. Having lot
of money can make Change the article
a lot
people
happy by purchsing
goods.
Correct your spelling
purchasing
However
, rupees can buy Things
but no joy. Secondly
, Other community things
that getting sucess
in life can make Correct your spelling
success
society
smile
. For example
, if a child gets happy by having good marks then
it that ways a dollar can not buy happiness
. Nation
should Add an article
The nation
A nation
also
focus on health which is better for a
body. Knowledge is Correct article usage
the
also
key to happiness
. As getting involved people
fill happy.
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. Change to a singular noun
thing
Thirdly
, According to
experience and ,knowledge
a rupee can buy just services but not all kinds of Add a comma
,knowledge
happiness
. So, a community should do those things
which make them feels
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feel
a comforts
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comforts
a comfort
although
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they shouls
shouls
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should
also
fouces
on Correct your spelling
focus
the
income too.Change the word
their
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