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Advantages and disadvantages studying in universities

#universities
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In
this
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 modern era, without doing higher
education
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 in
universities
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people
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 are not able to get well-paid jobs. Studying in tertiaries has both positive and negative sides.
This
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 essay will discuss both pros and cons in the subsequent paragraphs. To embark with, getting higher
education
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 in
universities
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 has positive
outcomes
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. The predominant one is that if students do graduation in
universities
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 they could get vast job opportunities.
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 would be worthwhile because they can earn a lot of money and make their future bright. Without
graduation
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 no one can get
well-paid
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 job. In order to get success in their life and to achieve everything in their life studying in
universities
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 helps them to do
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. In Vietnam,
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, 78% of individuals get jobs as they did higher from good
Universities
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.
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, it has negative
outcomes
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 which cannot be overlooked.
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, whenever any learner does an
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 in university they have to pay fees which is too much for every University. There are some
people
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 who cannot afford so they would not be able to do higher
education
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 in tertiaries. Many
people
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 get stressed as they are not able to pay the fees of
universities
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. Doing
education
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 in
universities
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 is not good for some
people
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. A survey conducted by the USA revealed that 78% of parents were getting stressed as they were not able to put their children in
universities
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 for
education
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 because they had no money to pay fees. In conclusion, studying at university not only have positive
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 but
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 negative
outcomes
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 which are important to consider.
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