The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the ratio of four different products that were refurbished between 1982 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that there are four selected materials for recycling they are Plastic and cardboard, Glass containers, Aluminium cans and Plastics. The paper items
rate was at its peak and the plastic rate was in decline in refurbishing.
To begin
,with the cardboard had a zigzag trend. Moreover
, the paper and board were straightforward to refurbish. In the ,beginning it has 60% of items
for recycling and at ,last
it has 70% of products. On the other hand
, the glass container materials show an upward fluctuation. In addition
, the glass pieces were 50% at first and at the end
of time
it was 60%.
Add a comma
,time
Secondly
, the aluminium can items
were the only one
product which has an upward trend. Correct pronoun usage
apply
However
, in 1982 it was 2% of materials for recycling and at the end
of ,era
it had 45% of Add an article
the era
items
for refurbishment. In addition
, the last
material is plastic which remained unchanged during the period. Furthermore
, the majority of these pieces were not included in the recycling process.Submitted by fazilharis20 on
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