the graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant

the graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant
The line graph illustrates how many thousands of
travellers
visit the
coast
, the
mountains
, or the lakes in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
, the
number
of
people
who visited the
coast
is the most throughout the period;
however
, in 2002, the
number
of
people
who chose to go to the
mountains
surpassed those who went to the
coast
.
Moreover
, the
mountains
are the least area that
travellers
went to from the year 1992 to 2007.  In 1987, there are 40
thousand
visitors from other countries who visited the
coast
, and the amount dropped a little to about 35
thousand
in 1992.
However
, it started to skyrocket since
then
and reached its peak of 75
thousand
in 2007.
On the other hand
, only 10
thousand
travellers
went to the lakes but it reached its highest point in 2002 when there are about 75
thousand
visitors.
Nevertheless
, the
number
experienced a decline from 2002 to 2007, when about 50 thousands of
people
visited the lakes. The
number
of
travellers
who go to the
mountains
increased steadily but slowly, which there are 20
thousand
people
in 1987 and approximately 35
thousand
of them in 2007.
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