the graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant
The line graph illustrates how many thousands of
travellers
visit the coast
, the mountains
, or the lakes in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
, the number
of people
who visited the coast
is the most throughout the period; however
, in 2002, the number
of people
who chose to go to the mountains
surpassed those who went to the coast
. Moreover
, the mountains
are the least area that travellers
went to from the year 1992 to 2007.
In 1987, there are 40 thousand
visitors from other countries who visited the coast
, and the amount dropped a little to about 35 thousand
in 1992. However
, it started to skyrocket since then
and reached its peak of 75 thousand
in 2007. On the other hand
, only 10 thousand
travellers
went to the lakes but it reached its highest point in 2002 when there are about 75 thousand
visitors. Nevertheless
, the number
experienced a decline from 2002 to 2007, when about 50 thousands of people
visited the lakes.
The number
of travellers
who go to the mountains
increased steadily but slowly, which there are 20 thousand
people
in 1987 and approximately 35 thousand
of them in 2007.Submitted by cindy8906115 on
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