the graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant
The line graph illustrates how many thousands of
travellers
visit the Use synonyms
coast
, the Use synonyms
mountains
, or the lakes in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
who visited the Use synonyms
coast
is the most throughout the period; Use synonyms
however
, in 2002, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
who chose to go to the Use synonyms
mountains
surpassed those who went to the Use synonyms
coast
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the Linking Words
mountains
are the least area that Use synonyms
travellers
went to from the year 1992 to 2007.
In 1987, there are 40 Use synonyms
thousand
visitors from other countries who visited the Use synonyms
coast
, and the amount dropped a little to about 35 Use synonyms
thousand
in 1992. Use synonyms
However
, it started to skyrocket since Linking Words
then
and reached its peak of 75 Linking Words
thousand
in 2007. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, only 10 Linking Words
thousand
Use synonyms
travellers
went to the lakes but it reached its highest point in 2002 when there are about 75 Use synonyms
thousand
visitors. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, the Linking Words
number
experienced a decline from 2002 to 2007, when about 50 thousands of Use synonyms
people
visited the lakes.
The Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
travellers
who go to the Use synonyms
mountains
increased steadily but slowly, which there are 20 Use synonyms
thousand
Use synonyms
people
in 1987 and approximately 35 Use synonyms
thousand
of them in 2007.Use synonyms
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