Some people believe that the best way to improve the general well-being of school children is to make physical education compulsory in all schools. Others, however, think that this would have little effect on overall health and other measures are needed. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

According to
,me both important physical
education
as well as
other measures are
also
needed. Schools should give both
education
. My opinion is described below.
Firstly
,
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people
believe that the best way to improve the general well-being of
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school children is to make physical
education
compulsory in all schools. As
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world has become a small market to live
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market not only book study is effective but physical study is
also
required. Institutions should provide more physical knowledge but it should not be compulsory it should be
according to
choice.
For example
, if a child gets 100% in school but can not able to solve real-life problems
then
his
education
will be not benefited.
People
should make choices on their own.
Secondly
, others,
however
, think that would have little effect on
overall
health and other measures are
also
needed. Only physical knowledge is not more but
also
overall
development is needed like health, speech, values of
people
and much more. Students should be involved in other activities like sports, dance, music, arts and much more.
For example
, If a child is highly educated but their health will not be good
then
there will be no use for learning. In conclusion,
according to
,me both is needed learning about day-to-day life
as well as
overall
growth is a benefit. It can not be said that physical learning has little effect only. Institutions should not make any rule compulsory for the
people
. They should be
overall
growth for the
people
by society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • compulsory
  • general well-being
  • physical fitness
  • mental health
  • a healthy lifestyle
  • teamwork
  • discipline
  • dietary issues
  • holistic health programs
  • nutritional education
  • inclusive environments
  • multifaceted approach
  • fostering a culture
  • mental health support
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