In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing high speed railway lines for inter-city travel. Others believe this money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
According to
me, both
is
important spending on high-speed Correct subject-verb agreement
are
railways
as well as
public transport. Government should spend even on railways
and on public transport. My viewpoint is discussed below.
Firstly
, high-speed railways
have many advantages such
as it become easy to travel inside city
. Add an article
the city
For example
, in a city like a
Mumbai Correct article usage
apply
were
traffic is more and people spend Correct your spelling
where
there
lots of time in Replace the word
their
traffice
in Correct your spelling
traffic
such
citys
and countries should Correct your spelling
cities
use
funds for a
Correct the article-noun agreement
railways
a railway
railways
. A country like the
Correct article usage
apply
india
should focus more on inter-city travelling because it Change the capitalization
India
help
to save Change the verb form
helps
the
money and more. Correct article usage
apply
Railways
are eco-friendly compare to the
Correct article usage
apply
road ways
. Correct your spelling
roadways
Hence
, a
government should Correct article usage
the
use
more for
trains.
Change preposition
apply
Secondly
, if a nation will use
the money for the
improving facilities like Correct article usage
apply
a
Correct article usage
apply
buildings
a roads and much more. Correct the article-noun agreement
building
For example
, in the citys
like Correct your spelling
city
a
Rajkot Correct article usage
apply
were
the community is using most of Correct your spelling
where
time
Add an article
the time
a
cars are there Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
road
should Fix the agreement mistake
roads
be improve
more. The nation should Change the verb form
be improved
be improving
also
use
taxes for building roads, airports and more. Thirdly
, a
transportation like a bus should be Remove the article
apply
also
growth
. Replace the word
growing
Thus
, the country should use
also
for
Change preposition
apply
a roads
. Correct the article-noun agreement
roads
a road
Thus
, a
People should support Correct article usage
apply
both
growth
.
In conclusion from my Change to a plural noun
growths
viewpoint
the government should spend equally on Add a comma
,viewpoint
high speed
railway lines for inter-city travel and improving existing public transport. Spending money on Add a hyphen
high-speed
both
is benefited
. So, Replace the word
beneficial
both
growth have
Change the verb form
has
Add an article
an advantage
the advantage
advantage
and there is no disadvantage for Fix the agreement mistake
advantages
this
. Hence
, by the above information
it is clear how a nation should spend income.Add a comma
,information
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