University students must pay all tuition fees, because it benefits mostly them individually, rather than the society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?
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this
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society
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Therefore
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society
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However
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people
think that Use synonyms
pupils
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money
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Therefore
, it is very important to pay their tuition fees and all of the other service fees and it is because it study at a college might be very lucrative for Linking Words
pupils
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this
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apply
expertise
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apply
money
to study at a university, they cannot become their best. Use synonyms
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apply
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but it is very costly Use synonyms
to
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the
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apply
in
all around the world.
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apply
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expert
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only beneficial for Add a missing verb
is not
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apply
society
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people
think that Use synonyms
the
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apply
people
might pay all their tuition Use synonyms
fee
because Fix the agreement mistake
fees
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money
in the future. Use synonyms
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this
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because
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, Use synonyms
therefore
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the
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apply
society
will destroy their talents.Use synonyms
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