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Buying things in internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more popular. Do advantage of this outweigh disadvantage.

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In today's scenario,
people
 buy their things like books, flight tickets and others via online shopping which is growing day by day. I suppose that upwards of
this
 phenomenon
outweigh
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 its drawbacks and
this
 essay will discuss it with its vast meaning. At the outset, nowadays, by growing of technology,
people
 use the
internet
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 almost in every field,
as well as
, it has
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an affect
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affect
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effect
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 on shopping. Especially, after
pandemic
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a pandemic
the pandemic
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 period it has been observed that
people
endeavored
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endeavoured
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 to buy their
necessity
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necessities
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 via
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the internet
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internet
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, because of its convenience. In
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,
by
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buying technological way support
people
time-saving
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in time-saving
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 and a great range of choices
which
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but
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 sometimes humankind struggle with
this
 issue. In
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, we may face
with
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problems
such
 as
as
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size and colour of clothes,
queue
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and queue
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 hub in front of cashiers;
however
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 it has been solved by
internet
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the internet
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 with just one click.
Moreover
, we need by no means wait in
the
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queues to buy something,
instead
 of that, it will be better to buy with the greatest discovery of centuries-the
internet
. To illustrate, statistics of a decade
has
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have
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 shown that the
numbers
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number
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 of
people
 in the shopping areas decreased a bit comparatively to the previous years.
On the other hand
,
it is clear that
,
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 those who prefer buying things by ordering, become unsocialized, especially
as
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if that person is
introvert
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an introvert
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. In its
broaden
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 meaning, shopping provides entertainment, social activities and other things
besides
 its own feature. Today, everybody especially
emloyees
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employees
, have tied up with their work and by going shopping
mall
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malls
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 they appreciate
theri
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their
 time,
as well as
 share their ideas with their families and friends which is the best activity for
menthal
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mental
 health. In a nutshell,
to buy
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buying
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 something
with
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in
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traditional
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the traditional
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 way has
positive
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a positive
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 effect on our relationships and psychological resting,
otherwise
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,otherwise
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 technology helps us
with
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by
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 providing flexibility and convenience.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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