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Increasing young population has affected older people how the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages.

#population #people #situation
According to
, be increasing young population has affected older people which a have much more advantages
this
 disadvantages. The advantages and disadvantages have been discussed below.
Firstly
, as the young population is
increased
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 there are lot many developments is seen.
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, today,
a
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new people have introduced so many things like
car
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cars
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 which have made our life easy. Growing more the children have development in technology. Kids have made goods and services easier to get
that
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from the market in less amount. At the
workplaces
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 more contribution is from a new staff. Old groups are not getting more and more placement
compare
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 to the young.
Secondly
, there are some things which development is wrong ways.
For example
, as a number of
a
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children are high day by day
which
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it
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 affects
old
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an old
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 person by getting
less
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fewer
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 chances and much more.
Thirdly
, if a new generation and
a
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 old generation will work together
then
 it will be better for the nation. In the growth of the nation
a
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children
as well as
 old
both
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have contributed. As kids are doing more and more so old people are not getting more benefits
for
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from
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 jobs. In
todays
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today's
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 time
advises
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 from the young is taken more and more than
the
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from the
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 old. New groups are helping
old
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the old
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 to learn new things. In conclusion, increasing a community has affected in good ways to
old
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an old
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 person. From the blow, information
it is clear that
 the increasing young population have
such
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much
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 more position than the negative.
However
, it advantages of
this
 situation do not outweigh the disadvantages.
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