Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that wealthy

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would feel the urge to monetarily support undeveloped

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. Presumably, the rationale

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action is largely

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the atrocious

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colonialism which led to a complete depletion of resources in colonized areas.

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,

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is one of the valid reasons that have encouraged some European governments to act differently by diverting part of the money of tax-payers to

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country

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, recent studies have

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that other equally effective avenues are to be explored in order to be more

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collaborative

. I assume that

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pecunary

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help is undoubtedly an

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resource,

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the governments should ensure that

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money will be properly invested to improve the

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in the receiver country. Despite these regulations

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being put in place, multiple undeveloped

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count on politicians who are hugely corrupt with a myriad of fruitless outcomes.

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,

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non-governmental

organizations are called on to swing into action and propose valid alternatives to reduce

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poverty

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these communities. It is commonly known that the complexity of the social background of these

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interfere

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significantly with the development of multiple projects.

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always publish news where workers of these organizations have been involved in terroristic attacks and so on. From a general perspective, a more productive interconnection between foreign affairs ministries and organizations, which are devoted to

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poverty-striken

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communities, is badly needed. Equally, money can be

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qualitatively

distribuited

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distributed

to achieve specific goals which live up to the expectations of both parties.

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, it is crucial to offer

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sustained support to low-income

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any donation should be associated with well-structured projects which

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the criteria of a solid plan.