You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir, I am a student of your institution in electric
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department
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my
course
,I had
intered
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intended
to learn about
computer
course
.Already I have acquired some basic knowledge from my friends who study
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computer
science. Now I am
studing
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studying
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seceond
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second
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after one year will be completed my diploma
course
.After
that
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I will try to get the job.Now
this
circumstance it is essential to learn about
computer
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that will help us in
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our career
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. I know that
this
program is only for those who finished their elementary preparation
course
,
however
, I would kindly ask you to waive
this
term for me. You can test me
instead
to assess my
computer
skills. I hope you will consider my request favourably. Should you require any more information please do not hesitate to send me an e-mail.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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