Natural resources such as oil, forests and freshwater are being consumed at an alarming rate all around the world. What problems does this cause? How can we solve these problems?
It is certainly true that natural the
resources
namely oil, forests and freshwater are being consumed at an alarming rate all
worldwide. Correct determiner usage
apply
Increase
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An increase
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in
demand
in
natural Change preposition
for
resources
will accelerate environmental issues as well as
in future
will face shortage
in freshwater, Add an article
a shortage
howover
, there some measures Correct your spelling
however
can
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that can
taken
by the governments to tackle Change the verb form
be taken
this
issue.
On the one hand, there are several problems will
appear Correct pronoun usage
that will
result
of Add an article
the result
a result
dramatic
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the dramatic
demend
natural Correct your spelling
demand
resources
. The primary issue dramatic deforestation will accelerate the
global warming and climate change. Correct article usage
apply
This
is because the
trees play a significant role to absorb Co2 emissions from the atmosphereCorrect article usage
apply
,
because global warming and climate change will Remove the comma
apply
occuur
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occur
result
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resulting
of
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in
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an increase
increase
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increasing
the
amount of Co2 footprint Change preposition
in the
in
the earth. A lack of Change preposition
on
freshwater
is another problem Correct your spelling
fresh water
will
encounter in Correct pronoun usage
that will
future
result of over Add an article
the future
a future
demand
in
natural Change preposition
for
resources
. To illustrate, in future
scientists will expect growth in Correct article usage
the future
populaitons
, which means the in Correct your spelling
populations
population
future
the amount of freshwater cannot meet the over demand
of people around the world.
On the other hand
, there are several actions can
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that can
taken
by governments to mitigate Change the verb form
be taken
this
issue. The first effective solution, the goverment
should introduce harsh laws Correct your spelling
government
set
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setting
limite
to Correct your spelling
limits
cut
down trees around the Wrong verb form
cutting
global
. Replace the word
globe
Furthermore
, authorities can impose taxes in
manufacturing Change preposition
on
companeis
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companies
who
Correct pronoun usage
that
cutt
down Correct your spelling
cut
forest
too much in order to produce their goods. Fix the agreement mistake
forests
build
more desalination power plants is another efficient solution to deal with Wrong verb form
Building
this
problem. For example
, the government should invest money to bulid
several desalination power plants in order to cope with Correct your spelling
build
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the dramaitc
dramaitc
Correct your spelling
dramatic
demand
in
water.
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for
To sum up
, overconsumpition
of natural Correct your spelling
overconsumption
over-consumption
resources
can leads to accelerate of
environmental Change preposition
apply
crisis
namely, global warming, Fix the agreement mistake
crises
climate
change, Correct word choice
and climate
also
in future
we will face Add a comma
,future
lack
of freshwater, Correct article usage
a lack
however
, there are some stpes
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steps
can
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that can
taken
by the government to cope with Change the verb form
be taken
this
problem inclduing
, introduce strict laws against deforestation, construct more desalination power plants to meet the global Correct your spelling
including
demand
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