The bar charts and line graph below show the results of a survey conducted over a three-year period to discover what people who live in London think of the city. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts and line graph below show the results of a survey conducted over a three-year period to discover what people who live in London think of the city. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two bar charts are rating things about living in London, from the most popular to the least popular one,
while
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the line graph deal with the major problems in the UK in a three years period.
Overall
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, society's perception of the worst and the best things about living in London has not changed much over the given period. Residents believe that the biggest problem in their city is litter.
Firstly
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,
according to
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the graph ,
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more than 40% of the community enjoy the wide variety of shops ,and over 20% love London's nightlife,more than 47% of residents complain about the cost of living, meanwhile some individuals consider UK transport one of the best things, more than 26 % consider it to be one of the worst aspects over the three years period.
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,the line graph shows a steady decline in the percentage of people worrying about air quality and noise pollution ,from nearly 60% to over 54%. More and more people start concerned about litter between the first years ,but
then
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this
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percentage declined symmetrically.
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