The graph below shows average cabon dixide emmisions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average cabon dixide emmisions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line graph illustrates the change
of
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carbon footprint in different four countries in 40 years, from 1967 to 2007. In general, what stands out from the graph is that
although
the figures in the United Kingdom and Sweden, which had consumed relatively large
amount
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of carbon dioxide throughout the designated period, witnessed declines, Italy and Portugal increased their
number
.
To begin
with, the largest figure can be seen in the UK during the
four decade
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, starting from just under 11
tonnes
in 1967.
However
, the
number
gradually fell
down
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to end up with approximately 9
tonnes
in 2007.
Similarly
, Sweden's figure, despite
of
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a rise until 1977 to hit the peak at just above 10
tonnes
, experienced an
overall
drop to finish at about 5.5
tonnes
.
On the other hand
, there were two countries, namely Italy and Portugal, whose
number
representing their CO2
emmision
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emission
grew in the 40-year period.
While
the Italian
number
almost doubled from roughly 4
tonnes
to around 8
tonnes
, Portugal went up its
number
considerably from a
tonnes
in the initial year to show
almost
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five-fold
number
in the final year.
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