The graph below shows average cabon dixide emmisions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average cabon dixide emmisions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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The line graph illustrates the change
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carbon footprint in different four countries in 40 years, from 1967 to 2007. In general, what stands out from the graph is that
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the figures in the United Kingdom and Sweden, which had consumed relatively large
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of carbon dioxide throughout the designated period, witnessed declines, Italy and Portugal increased their
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with, the largest figure can be seen in the UK during the
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, starting from just under 11
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in 1967.
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, the
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gradually fell
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to end up with approximately 9
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in 2007.
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, Sweden's figure, despite
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a rise until 1977 to hit the peak at just above 10
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, experienced an
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drop to finish at about 5.5
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, there were two countries, namely Italy and Portugal, whose
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representing their CO2
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emission
grew in the 40-year period.
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the Italian
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almost doubled from roughly 4
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to around 8
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, Portugal went up its
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considerably from a
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in the initial year to show
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five-fold
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in the final year.
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