Last week, you celebrated your birthday with some friends in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed yourselves very much. Write a letter to the restaurant. In your letter mention the food and service explain that you really enjoyed the atmosphere suggest any improvements to make things better You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my great appreciation for the service of your restaurant

last

week. I am still immersed in the enjoyable atmosphere today like that day. Thanks

for

Change preposition

to

show examples

you and your colleagues help me to create

such

an unforgettable celebration for my 50 years old birthday. Both my friends and my daughter love the cake which your chief prepared for us. Especially when the light was turned down and the candle was lightened and

being

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

taken out. The flower and shining words on the cake were so amazing. The lily flower that you decorated surrounding the table entirely exceeded my expectation. It creates a very wonderful view in that room. One point I have to mention is that when my dress was accidentally stained, your staff kindly reminded me and got me a replacement, which successfully helps me to avoid the embarrassment

then

.I am so appreciative of your consideration and kindness. The only one of my dissatisfaction was the number of meals; it seemed to be a little bit not enough so we had to add some fruit. But I believe that the next time we can enjoy enough food. I'm beginning to look forward to my husband's birthday in your restaurant. Yours sincerely, Tina.