the diagram shows the stages of making bricks
This
diagram illustrates the way in which bricks
are made for the building industry. Overall
, this
process has 7 stages, beginning with the digging up of clay
from the ground and culminating in delivery.
To begin
, the clay
used to make the bricks
is dug up from the ground by a large digger. This
clay
is then
placed onto a metal grid. A roller assists in this
stage to break up the clay
into smaller pieces. Following
this
, water and sand are added to the clay
, and this
mixture is turned into bricks
either by placing it in a mould or using a wire cutter. These bricks
are then
placed in an oven to dry for 24- 48 hours. In the subsequent stage, the bricks
go through a heating and cooling process. They are heated in a kiln at moderate and high temperatures (from 309c -509c), followed by a cooling process in a chamber for 48 hours.
Finally
, the bricks
are packed and delivered to their destinations.Submitted by Rosa on
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