the diagram shows the stages of making bricks

the diagram shows the stages of making bricks
This
diagram illustrates the way in which
bricks
are made for the building industry.
Overall
,
this
process has 7 stages, beginning with the digging up of
clay
from the ground and culminating in delivery.
To begin
, the
clay
used to make the
bricks
is dug up from the ground by a large digger.
This
clay
is
then
placed onto a metal grid. A roller assists in
this
stage to break up the
clay
into smaller pieces.
Following
this
, water and sand are added to the
clay
, and
this
mixture is turned into
bricks
either by placing it in a mould or using a wire cutter. These
bricks
are
then
placed in an oven to dry for 24- 48 hours. In the subsequent stage, the
bricks
go through a heating and cooling process. They are heated in a kiln at moderate and high temperatures (from 309c -509c), followed by a cooling process in a chamber for 48 hours.
Finally
, the
bricks
are packed and delivered to their destinations.
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