Some people warn that the silver screen era is coming to an end and that people will eventually lose interest in going to the cinema. Do you agree or disagree with this view?
Theatres have always been a centre of attraction since their inauguration, no matter, where they are and how they are maintained. Movies have always enjoyed an important stage in the culture of different countries.
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, in my opinion, they have lost a bigger number of viewers in the latest decade. Focusing on the fact that the Internet has opened a new world for us and has really affected our likes and dislikes too , it has brought down the popularity of cinemas really quickly.
First of all, with evolving world, cinemas now are not as popular as they used to be 20 to 30 years back when people did not have many sources of entertainment. Now, society in general has a busy schedule and it is hard to find time to go to theatres.Even if they have time, there are multiple other resorts like waterparks, winter land etc which they prefer over cinemas. Linking Words
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, today, everyone has access to the Internet and through ,that they can enjoy movies, series, music etc in the comfort of their own home and cars. They don't need to spend extra money to watch them. Linking Words
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, online platforms like Netflix have really got appreciation because of their lower subscription charges and availability of material of interest for every age.Inflation is really at its peak now and people are not interested in utilising their money on entertainment only as they have better alternatives these days.
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business has not much in future to add. Most of the cinema halls have already been changed to food courts and shopping malls and the remaining ones are finding their ways to strive.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite