What are not satisfied with the changing rooms in a sports center that you visit. Write a letter to the sports center manager. In your letter: -Explain the problem. -Say how you feel about this problem. - Say what steps you would like the manager to take.

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Dear Sir I am writing to express my concerns about the inappropriate condition of male changing rooms at Azadi Sports Center. There are several issues with the changing amenities which are simply unacceptable.

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, there is graffiti on the walls.

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, the floors are always dirty, which leads me to question whether a cleaner is even employed here.

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, there is a bad smell around the room, and

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is extremely unpleasant.

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complete negligence over the state of your changing rooms has left me considering whether to cancel my membership and look

elsewhere

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. I can only feel undervalued as a member when my experience is deemed less important than marginal profit gains. To address

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situation, I would strongly advise a full refurbishment of the facilities

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the employment of a regular cleaner. If no action is taken, I will be forced to end my membership and recommend others to do the same. Yours faithfully, Kambiz Pirzad

kambiz.pirzadFri Jul 14 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

160 words

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What are not satisfied with the changing rooms in a sports center that you visit. Write a letter to the sports center manager. In your letter: -Explain the problem. -Say how you feel about this problem. - Say what steps you would like the manager to take.

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Some employers believe that job applicants’ social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Today more and more people wants things instantly( e.g goods, service, news). Why is this ? Is it positive or negative development ?

In many large cities, people have to spend hours driving in heavy traffic every day. What are the effects of this on society and the individual? What can be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.