The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates
Agriculture
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,
Industry
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and services domain donation to India's GDP between 1960 to 2000.
Overall
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, It is noticeable that by the end of the
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period the services sector has invested a lot in India GDP's compared to
agriculture
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and
industry
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. In ,contrast
Agriculture
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was seeing a drastic drop by 2000. In regard to
agriculture
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, 40 years ago they started with the 63% subsidy and being the maximum contributor to India's GDP , but slowly it followed a reversal trend where the percentage hit 15% by 2000.
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the
Industry
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sector was gradually growing with a 5% difference from 1960 to 1980 and it became stable for the next years and ended at 25% by 2020.
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,year by year the growth of the service
industry
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in the contribution is increasing and It shows the opposite view of
agriculture
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and achieved the proportion that
agriculture
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was providing in 1960 as 60%
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