The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. How the Unemployed Spend their Time, UK, last year
The table displays information about one year how unemployed people used their leisure in the UK.
Overall
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this
data gives the same information that compares Linking Words
men
and Use synonyms
women
, the three most common activities were more likely, Use synonyms
such
as housework, shopping, and hunting, Linking Words
while
other works were few proportions.
Morning and afternoon housework percentages were 49% and 21% both two shifts of Linking Words
women
more than Use synonyms
men
approximately 26% done, Use synonyms
this
is one of the most popular tasks that Linking Words
women
spent their leisure compared to others. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
men
were less likely to expenditure homework when they have time.
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On the other hand
, most Linking Words
women
went shopping at about 70% which means combined both two times of the whole year, Use synonyms
while
males were not similar percentage going shopping at 29% the entire timespan. Linking Words
Whereas
hunting and gardening were famous jobs that Linking Words
men
did a high proportion compared to females. Use synonyms
Therefore
, other remaining activities have a tiny amount of time.Linking Words
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