After working in your department for over 3 years, you feel the need to switch your department.Write a letter to your boss requesting a change in the department. In the letter mention: Why do you want to switch departments? Which department would you prefer? Why do you think you are a good fit in that department?

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Dear Mr Brown. After I have already three years in my

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, as an assistant in the economics department, I believe

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the right time to make a step forward, for a supervisor

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. I grab the opportunity of your email, where you announce that the supervisor of technical support will leave our organisation a month from now. As you know, but maybe don't remember, I have a degree in Computer Science. I know very well the problems we have in

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field, and I am absolutely sure that I can be the perfect person for that

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, I think I can be more productive, in my current

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, almost six months from now I will have my Master's in Artificial intelligence. Mark always talks a lot and he was considering my opinions. Take

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as a proposal for thought and, please let me know if we can have sometime onwards a conversation about that. Thanks, and I look forward to your answer. Regards, Pen John

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