The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information about the contribution made by sectors to Indian gross domestic products between 1960 and 2000.
Overall
, it can be seen that the three major sectors are agriculture, industry and services. Linking Words
Moreover
, the services had an increased variation, Linking Words
as well as
, agriculture plummet change.
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To begin
with, agriculture made 60% of the contribution to Linking Words
GDP
in 1960. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, production has dramatically fallen in the upcoming years, Linking Words
as well as
, it contributed 15% to Linking Words
GDP
in 2000. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the industry sector remained constant in productivity.
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In addition
, it contributed 15% of materials to Linking Words
GDP
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,
but managed to produce 30% in 1990. Remove the comma
apply
Although
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at the end
of the period Linking Words
this
manufactured only 25% of products.
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Secondly
, the Linking Words
last
sector services it manufactured 15% of goods to Linking Words
GDP
. Use synonyms
However
, it had a rise variation, the production of goods reached a peak in 2000. Linking Words
At the end
of , the era it contributed 65% of materials to Gross Domestic Product.Linking Words
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