The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information about the contribution made by sectors to Indian gross domestic products between 1960 and 2000.
Overall
, it can be seen that the three major sectors are agriculture, industry and services. Moreover
, the services had an increased variation, as well as
, agriculture plummet change.
To begin
with, agriculture made 60% of the contribution to GDP
in 1960. Furthermore
, production has dramatically fallen in the upcoming years, as well as
, it contributed 15% to GDP
in 2000. On the other hand
, the industry sector remained constant in productivity.
In addition
, it contributed 15% of materials to GDP
,
but managed to produce 30% in 1990. Remove the comma
apply
Although
, at the end
of the period this
manufactured only 25% of products.
Secondly
, the last
sector services it manufactured 15% of goods to GDP
. However
, it had a rise variation, the production of goods reached a peak in 2000. At the end
of , the era it contributed 65% of materials to Gross Domestic Product.Submitted by fazilharis20 on
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