The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009. Summarise it.

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The charts illustrate the purpose of

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and the problem faced by US travellers in public.

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, it is understandable that people often tend to

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for work and the issue faced by them is related to the price of

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. In regard to the reasons for

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,most of the population accepted that they do it to go for work compared to other reasons, with a rate of approximately 49% out of 100.

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personal reasons and shopping have a similar range

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as 19% and 16% .,Meanwhile the purpose for social and visiting relatives was below 10%. In terms of issues for travellers, their major concern is the price of

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which has a one-third percentage of 100 , followed by safety concerns and aggressive drivers with a proportion of 19% and 17%.

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, highway congestion has 14% of votes.The access to public transport and space for pedestrians were quite similar with 8% and 6%

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009. Summarise it.

In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these views?

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